Monday, 14 March 2011

Tutor Feedback on proforma


STUDENT NAME: ANNAHITA MACKEE

Research question:
How can traditional practices and values be maintained by combining crafting with contemporary culture?
How can traditional practices and culture be maintained with the use of crafting in contemporary society?
How can the use of crafting in contemporary society help encourage traditional community values?


DOES THE PROGRESS REPORT SUBMITTED BY 22 FEBRUARY EVIDENCE LISTS OF:
FEEDBACK RESPONDANTS TO DATE?

COLLABORATORS TO DATE? (where applicable) YES

CONVINCING EVIDENCE OF ONGOING ARTEFACT TESTING  SINCE DECEMBER 2010 YES

CONVINCING EVIDENCE OF NEW FINDINGS PRODUCED BY ARTEFACT TESTING SINCE DECEMBER 2010? YES

APPROPRIATE AND REALISTIC NEXT KEY ACTIONS? YES

(PLEASE COMMENT ON ANY OF THE ABOVE AS NECESSARY)

What is your overall evaluation of the student’s work AT THIS STAGE?
0    1    2x    3    4
0= Unsatisfactory; 1= Satisfactory; 2= good; 3= Very good; 4=Outstanding

KEY ADVICE  GIVEN TO THE STUDENT:
Please use between 2 and 6 (maximum) bullet points


·          You really need to fix on just one question asap
·         It’s not completely clear from  your proforma that you are planning to use your artifacts as your research  tools (which you must!!)
·         Your background research is impressive - I think you may be ready to move beyond this phase now?
·         Your “If” is idealistic and impressive – how would you make this come about in practical terms?
·         Try to keep the tangible enthusiasm going!!!
·          I would recommend that you produce a time plan that runs right up to the exhibition in December
        

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